ONE:
Interior of the Captain’s Cabin.
SABRE is at her table, head in her hands, elbows propped. The WEATHER MAP is open before her.
NO COPY.
TWO:
Reverse, past SABRE, looking up to see DRAKE entering.
NO COPY.
THREE:
Two-shot, SABRE seated, looking up at DRAKE.
DRAKE looking down at her.
FOUR:
Stet, but SABRE has her attention once more on the map.
1. SABRE: I asked not to be disturbed.
2. DRAKE: And so I’ve not for coming on four days, now.
I like the painting on her wall of a ship on water
Some of your best panels.
she asked not to be disturbed…a good response would have been “ma’am, you already look plenty disturbed”
she’s been reading that map…and it predicts something bad is going to happen.
I think she’s still upset about the people who were injured or killed during the battle, not to mention the damage to her beloved ship. Although the weather map could certainly be contributing to her mood.
That last line is missing some punctuation.
It’s different to see her vulnarable side
I’m not sure that we are, this is just a more direct form of armor, rather than the glib adventurer one she normally uses.
Really like the quiet pacing. Boom: it’s been four days, she’s slipping into some odd emotional state, Drake’s finally and quietly hit his limit, Drum’s silent romance of the eager crewwoman proceeds apace. So much conveyed in three pages!