Screen 1

ONE:
New angle, wide shot, now “on level” with the ships in the Aether.

We can see that PEGASUS has completed her larboard maneuver, and is now starboard-facing the SMOKE CLOUD, obscuring IRON CROWN, which is about to NOSE into the CLOUD.

PEGASUS has her cannon ports open, the starboard bristling with guns.

The THREE FLYERS are still in motion; ONE of them has completed a strafing run that will take it “below” the line of PEGASUS.

NO COPY.

Screen 2

ONE:
Beneath PEGASUS, angle as the KEEL GUN swivels about, tracking the FLYER from previous day, screen 2.

1. ERICH/keel gun: …c’mon, c’mon
2. ERICH/keel gun: …Torque—

TWO:
On ERICH, in the KEEL GUN, lining up his shot. He’s shouting at Torque through the voice tube.

3. ERICH: —gimme the steam!

4. SFX: khk-hhSHSSSSS

THREE:
Angle on the KEEL GUN, as ERICH opens fire, leading a line of SHOTS that tear into the FLYER before it can pull up.

5. SFX: KATCH-A-KATCH-A-KATCH-A-KATCH-A-KATCH-A-KATCH-A-KATCH