Screen 1
ONE:
SABRE is on her feet and facing DRAKE. DRAKE is as calm and complacent as ever.
SABRE is – not unreasonably – insulted.
1. SABRE: It’s fortunate for you that I’m a woman, then.
2. SABRE: You play dangerous cards, Miles Drake. Even in Tanitin, a
challenge to one’s honor must be answered.
3. DRAKE: Answer it, then.
TWO:
DRAKE has moved a step closer, so they’re all but face-to-face. He’s not going to back down.
SABRE has turned coldly furious.
4. DRAKE: You’re sailing to Makers knows where, with a map which –
5. DRAKE: - if it does as you say –
6. DRAKE: - foretells the fates of nations…
THREE:
Stet.
7. DRAKE: …I’ll damn well question both your honor and your intention.
Screen 2
ONE:
Face-to-face now, even closer.
1. SABRE: You’re very provincial, you know that?
TWO:
New angle, SABRE has turned away, leaving DRAKE frustrated and somewhat surprised. He was really hoping he’d get an answer or two.
2. SABRE: It’s almost charming.
3. DRAKE: Dammit, woman—
THREE:
DRAKE has reached out for SABRE’S arm. She’s turning back to him, surprised.
4. DRAKE: —I’ll know your intentions!
5. SABRE: You’ll take your hand from me is what you’ll do, Marshal…
FOUR:
SABRE.
Dangerous light flickering in her eyes, despite the easy smile.
6. SABRE: …or you’ll need one less holster on your hip.






Tut tut Miles, really. Manhandling the captain on her own ship? His temper gets the better of him it seems, as he forgets his badge is little more than a shiny piece of metal this far into the Aether.
Wow!
I just found this site and read the story to date. This is amazing. I feel like I owe someone $. Great work!
I can’t believe I missed the start of Chapter 7, but what a treat to read the first six chapters in a row! I’m loving how these two play off each other.
Oh Damn, OH Damn, OH DAMN!
Then again is there some….. other type of tension there? Hmmmmm
He made her frown! Fie on thee, Miles Drake!
Love the story and art. Cannot wait for more – though I suppose I don’t really have a choice! Found this site through a mention on Felicia Day’s “The Flog”
Seems they bring out the best and worst in each other. This is either going to be a beautiful relationship, or a short one. Personally, I have to give them each credit. She finally got through his mask, and vice-versa.
Possibly both beautiful and short? (Though one hopes the latter won’t obtain!)
I was starting to wonder if she ever didn’t smile!