Comments on: Chapter 05, Part Four: That little piece of metal http://www.ineffableaether.com/2012/04/19/chapter-05-part-four-that-little-piece-of-metal/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=chapter-05-part-four-that-little-piece-of-metal Sat, 25 May 2013 00:44:18 +0000 hourly 1 By: James http://www.ineffableaether.com/2012/04/19/chapter-05-part-four-that-little-piece-of-metal/#comment-9376 James Tue, 24 Apr 2012 06:38:50 +0000 http://www.ineffableaether.com/?p=441#comment-9376 Nice! I love how much detail you’ve poured into the setting. When you can answer questions like that, even if you haven’t thought about them ahead of time, but when you can look at something and just instinctively *know*… that tells a lot about how much time you’ve spent imagining this story. Thanks for responding!

]]> By: James http://www.ineffableaether.com/2012/04/19/chapter-05-part-four-that-little-piece-of-metal/#comment-9306 James Sun, 22 Apr 2012 23:19:53 +0000 http://www.ineffableaether.com/?p=441#comment-9306 A man was murdered, a judge was bought, and the law
was made a whore.
If Darius Payne weren’t behind it, he knows who is.

I love this line!! I’ve rarely read a single line that seems to capture the core of what a character cares about. Bravo!

]]> By: motorfirebox http://www.ineffableaether.com/2012/04/19/chapter-05-part-four-that-little-piece-of-metal/#comment-9270 motorfirebox Sun, 22 Apr 2012 07:05:43 +0000 http://www.ineffableaether.com/?p=441#comment-9270 I’d have to check, but I’m pretty sure that if you actually say that to someone, it’s legally required that you be bumped up to full sheriff.

]]> By: Greg http://www.ineffableaether.com/2012/04/19/chapter-05-part-four-that-little-piece-of-metal/#comment-9267 Greg Sun, 22 Apr 2012 06:00:27 +0000 http://www.ineffableaether.com/?p=441#comment-9267 I’d have to double-check with Rick on this, but my suspicion is that it’s a painting. In fact, I can even imagine who painted it. And it wasn’t Lady S.

]]> By: Greg http://www.ineffableaether.com/2012/04/19/chapter-05-part-four-that-little-piece-of-metal/#comment-9263 Greg Sun, 22 Apr 2012 03:48:11 +0000 http://www.ineffableaether.com/?p=441#comment-9263 Consider it gratis for services rendered.

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