Screen 1

ONE:
Wide shot, past DRAKE and DRUM, to PAYNE and the GUNMEN.

It’s about to go down.

Sunset.

NO COPY.

TWO:
Reverse previous, past PAYNE, to DRAKE and DRUM. Re-establish the CRATES and the STEAM ENGINE, please.

NO COPY.

Screen 2
Little denser than we normally go, here; if this doesn’t work, let me know. I’m imagining the second row of tight CUs.

FIRST ROW:

ONE:
Wide tableau. Yes, I know, I’m really dragging this out. What can I say? I keep hearing Ennio Morricone music in my head as I write this….

NO COPY.

SECOND ROW.
TWO:
CU on DRAKE’S RIGHT HAND, hovering over the grip of his pistol.

NO COPY.

THREE:
CU one of the GUNMEN, thumbing back the HAMMER on his long gun.

NO COPY.

FOUR:
CU DRUM, easing his multi-gun into position.

NO COPY.

FIVE:
CU another GUNMAN, fingers stroking the grip of his PISTOL.

SIX:
Stet previous, but the GUNMAN is now beginning his DRAW.

NO COPY.