Wide shot, past DRAKE and DRUM, to PAYNE and the GUNMEN.
It’s about to go down.
Reverse previous, past PAYNE, to DRAKE and DRUM. Re-establish the CRATES and the STEAM ENGINE, please.
Little denser than we normally go, here; if this doesn’t work, let me know. I’m imagining the second row of tight CUs.
Wide tableau. Yes, I know, I’m really dragging this out. What can I say? I keep hearing Ennio Morricone music in my head as I write this….
CU on DRAKE’S RIGHT HAND, hovering over the grip of his pistol.
CU one of the GUNMEN, thumbing back the HAMMER on his long gun.
CU DRUM, easing his multi-gun into position.
CU another GUNMAN, fingers stroking the grip of his PISTOL.
Stet previous, but the GUNMAN is now beginning his DRAW.