Screen 1
ONE:
OTS DRAKE, still following PAYNE.
PAYNE is walking with purpose, tucking his “pocket watch” away.
NO COPY.
TWO:
Angle, DRAKE glancing up to where DRUM is paralleling their track, silhouetted atop the building alongside.
NO COPY.
THREE:
Almost stet Panel One, but Payne is out of sight.
NO COPY.
FOUR:
DRAKE reacting. Eyes narrowing.
NO COPY.
Sneaky ol’ Payne, he even took that paving stone with him!
I really love the cow-boy close ups on Drake’s eyes. Is he expecting a trap?!
I think Drake ALWAYS expects a trap. That’s why he’s lived so long.
Thank you for posting the “script.” I wish Lovecraft is Missing & certain other comics would do that.
Side note: this threw me for a moment. Based on the first panel of the previous screen, I was under the impression Payne was entering a building.
Also want to echo pdunwin above. Having the script is great. In fact, I think the whole layout and design of the site kicks butt.
I keep hitting NEXT, but nothing is happening. Does this mean I have to wait until Monday??
I too love the close up of the eyes. There’s a great one of Seneca Sabre in one of the first panels.
He went left, Drake.
Also, there might be a giant robot down there.