Comments on: Chapter 02, Part Ten: Cover http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=ch02s10a Fri, 17 May 2013 23:52:32 +0000 hourly 1 By: ArleySD http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/#comment-1721 ArleySD Wed, 19 Oct 2011 00:52:12 +0000 http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/#comment-1721 I figure the difference in the script is more about Drum being a man of few(est) words. Why use 4 when 2 will suffice?

]]> By: Greg http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/#comment-1674 Greg Mon, 17 Oct 2011 13:11:08 +0000 http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/#comment-1674 There are multiple versions of this chapter’s script; it’s quite possible that what was posted is from an earlier draft. I haven’t had a chance to check yet, as I’m about to head out to the airport for the flight home. Will look, though….

]]> By: James Carter http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/#comment-1673 James Carter Mon, 17 Oct 2011 13:08:12 +0000 http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/#comment-1673 I love that shot of Drake leaping over the bar, and the three panel sequence at the end. Awesome action. Drum reloading is pretty neat too!

I notice Drum’s dialogue changed from the script “When have I not?” to the final page “Of course.” Did the script version not sound natural enough, why the change? Also, was that a last minute thing?

]]> By: Moni Bolis http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/#comment-1668 Moni Bolis Mon, 17 Oct 2011 11:50:40 +0000 http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/#comment-1668 Another wonderful page

]]> By: John G http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/#comment-1660 John G Mon, 17 Oct 2011 04:35:53 +0000 http://www.ineffableaether.com/2011/10/17/ch02s10a/#comment-1660 Why did you change the copy from “When have I not” to “Of course”? Does it provide a deeper insight into Drum’s character, or was it something banal like amount of space?

Just curious…

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